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    The Day I Met Fate

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    Kiba

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    The Day I Met Fate

    Post  Kiba on Sat Dec 25, 2010 12:25 am

    It's a short story I wrote, not about my wolf, nor the pack. Just a random story I pulled from my head... enjoy.

    Warning: It has blood, not gore, but blood. It also contains hunters.

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    My long legs carried me as fast as they would go, I feared that they would fail on me. Luckily for me, I was far ahead from what was a threat. I knew not even the slightest of what the beast was, but I collapsed when I pushed myself far enough. My limbs were exhausted.

    I was huffing for air. Hunger gnawed at me, my mind was slowly being eaten away... at the very same moment, so was my life. I smelled rot, and traces of blood. I looked at the round injury on my hind leg, it seemed to be becoming disgusting.

    I whimpered in pain and licked it. Why me..? I bitterly thought. I lifted myself back up with determination.

    I will not be roadkill.. nor will I be the victim to this monster..! I thought, this time with confidence and pride. I was who I always have been at this moment, the proud alpha I once was. I seemed to have forgotten the pain I was in, the stinging and itching of my wound.

    I got up, my tail was raised. I dragged myself away, I could smell the scent of who harmed me. Hunger gnawed again, but harder this time. I fell due to hunger and I needed food.

    A hare was chewing on the dandelion while I was suffering. Suddenly, as if nothing touched it, the hare died! I quickly ripped into the hare and tore out every bit of the meat I could eat. When I ate, and finished; I got up ad ran away from the area.

    I heard loud 'BANG' sounds, the sounds got more constant by the minute. Something zoomed past me and cut my shoulder. Vital fluid oozed from my cut, but that did not stop me. I raced quick like a cheetah. my tail trail behind me.

    The pace was too fast, I felt like I just won't last this time. Several more bang sounds came, several more of those gleaming, honeyed, flying chunks of metal came with the bangs. Never have I been so frightened, then after running so long, that seemed like forever, a chunk stabbed through my anterior. Cruor came from the malignant wound as I slammed to the ground.

    I was slowly dying, achingly. I felt loathsome. The monster.. my killer, came to me. He lay down a sharp blow to my ribs.

    I felt so frail. The blow broke a few of my ribs, maybe pieced my lungs. Fluid came from me as I hacked. Death was coming... and fast.

    Another chunk of metal stabbed me, and through my chest. My eyes blanked out. I stopped breathing, and I laid limp.
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    I'm sorry if this type of story is unacceptable, but it's my thing.
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    Re: The Day I Met Fate

    Post  Lyra on Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:35 pm

    This is heart wrenching. And very well written. And I'm glad you wrote a disclaimer! Thanks.
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    Kiba

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    Re: The Day I Met Fate

    Post  Kiba on Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:40 pm

    Lyra wrote:This is heart wrenching. And very well written. And I'm glad you wrote a disclaimer! Thanks.
    I tend to post warnings before some of my stories when I post it on a pack site. Glad it's well-written.

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